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Whilst looking at this storyboard you can see a few things that it is messing, for example it doesn’t have much text on the board. The only text that is on it is the little sections of writing in the word bubbles. Even though there is little text the drawing has so much detailed the idea and point of the story still comes across.

 

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Looking at this storyboard there is not many things going for it, the drawing is not great and there is not much discretion from the text. If there was more text then that would be ok and cover the bad imagery but there isn’t. To improve this board there would need to be more text to describe whats going on.

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